Explaining a Process-3

If you want to go to Liberty Bell Pavillion, just follow the directions. First, go west for three blocks.  Then , turn right and walk up Sixth Street , and you can see Liberty Bell Pavillion is on the corner of Sixth Street and Market Street.

Explaining a Process-2

To show that black is a better collector of solar energy than white,  you can conduct an experiment.  What you need are 2 tin cans, black and white paint and a room thermometer.  The first step is to paint the cans-one black, one white.  Next, fill the cans wth water.  Then, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours.  Finally, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare.  You will find that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher.  It is an easy experiment and you can try it in your free time.

Explaining a Process-1

  It is easy to pot a plant if you follow thw right procedure.  To begin with, cover bottom of pot with small stones.  Then, put two inches of soil on top of  rocks.  Next,  make a hole in center of soil and drop plant into soil.  After that, add soil until it almost reaches the top of pot.  Then, press soil down with thumbs.  Finally, water plant.  Follow the steps above, and it is possible that your plant will grow well.

The most embarrasing moment revised1

When I was a junior high school student, I once took part in a relay race at my school’s athletic meet.  I really wanted to win the championship so I took the race very seriously.  I not only practiced hard but asked my classmates to do their best.  As long as I wasn't satisfyied with their performance, I would scold them strictly during our practice.  Finally, the athletic meet day came and soon the relay race began.  At first, our team ran very well and was in the lead.  When it was my turn, I also ran very fast; however, when I was close to the next runner, I suddenly slipped.  My mistake made our team lose the competition in the end.  I felt extremely embarrassed when I saw my classmates’ depressed expression and it was really an unforgettable experience.

The movie I have watched revised 1

I once watched a movie, which was about four children.  Their mother gave birth to them but she didn’t get married.  So she didn’t let anyone know her children’s presence.  They lived in a small apartment and stayed at home all day instead of going to school when their mother was working.  One day, they got up and found that their mother had gone with some money left.  They believed that she would come back soon, so they waited patiently.  However, she didn’t come back after a long time, and the children were gradually running out of money.  Another day, the eldest son called their mother up only to find that she had got married.  Their house became mess and dirty, moreover, water and electronic was cut off because they couldn’t pay the rent.  With time passing by, they began feeling hopeless and worried, however, as no one knew them, they couldn’t get any help.  Aferward, the youngest sister fell down when she was playing alone and died.  Not knowing what to do, his brother could only bury her secretly with a girl they met in a park.  It was a sad story and I think what the children faced was very impressive.

The Most Embarrasing Moment

When I was a junior high school student, I once took part in a relay race at my school’s athletic meet.  I really wanted to win the championship so I took the race very seriously.  I not only practiced hard but asked my classmates to do their best.  Once I didn’t satisfy with their performance, I would scold them strictly during our practice.  Finally, the athletic meet day came and soon the relay race began.  At first, our team ran very well and was in the lead.  When it was my turn, I also ran very fast; however, when I was close to the next runner, I suddenly slipped.  My mistake made our team lose the competition and I felt extremely embarrassed when I saw my classmates’ depressed expression.

The movie I have wtched

I once watched a movie, which was about four children.  Their mother gave birth to them but she didn’t get married, so she didn’t let anyone know her children’s presence.  They lived in a small apartment and they stayed at home all day instead of going to school when their mother was working.  One day, they got up and found that their mother had gone with some money left.  They believed that she would come back soon, so they waited patiently.  However, she didn’t come back after a long time, and the children were gradually running out of money.  One day, the eldest son called their mother up only to found that she had got married.  Their house became mess and dirty, moreover, water and electronic was cut off because they couldn’t pay the rent.  With time passing by, they began feeling despair and worried, however, as no one knew them, they couldn’t get any help.  One day, the youngest sister fell down and died.  Not knowing what to do, his brother could only bury her secretly with a girl they met in a park.  It was a sad story and I think what the children faced was very impressive.