Discussing Effects-2
Acton is a small town in the Midwest. It has a population of 2,500. Now, Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory in Acton. As a resident in Acton, I think it may cause some negative results. The first one is pollution. The factory will lead to environmental pollution as it starts operating. Water and air will be dirty. Another problem is that the open of the new factory will bring many new people to the community, and these people may make the town different. Acton is a safe, clean, and quiet place, but the new migrators may make the town a noisy and bustling one. Last but not least, as more and more people move into the small town, living space will be insufficient. House price may rise rapidly and people may have no enough money to buy a house. Such is why I consider it bad that a big factory open in Acton.
but the new migrators may make the town a noisy and bustling one.
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make the town turn into a .....
然後沒錯喔 :D
the open of the new factory
回覆刪除open要改成名詞opening哦
why I consider it bad that a big factory open in Acton.
回覆刪除裡的open 我想要+S吧!
以上~
the open
回覆刪除我想改成the opening耶
應該就是這樣了=ˇ=
Such is why I consider it bad that a big factory "open" in Acton.
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House price may rise rapidly and people may have no enough money to buy a house.
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"people will not have enough money..."可否?
(個人想法)
我喜歡最後一句^_^
回覆刪除品婷我愛你。
你那個標題要不要改一下
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才不會連自己都搞錯喔!!!
良心建議!!!
Such is why I consider it bad that a big factory open in Acton.
回覆刪除﹡is改are會不會比較好?
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