2011年5月18日 星期三
Contrasting-2
There are two people applying for the position as an English instructor. One of them is Lynn Whitnall and the other is Debra Fines. If I was the human resource manager, I will accept the applicationfrom Debra Fines for several reasons. First, Debra has mare education than Lynn. Debra has gone to three universityies while Lynn has gone to one. Besides, Debra also has more employment experiences than Lynn. She has had worked as a consultant and author, an instructer and a teaching assistant and so on.Though unlike Lynn, Debra doesnt's speak Spanish and Japanese, she is fluent in French. And in addition, Debra has publication whereas Lynn doesn't. According to the statemaent above, Debra seems to be the better choice for this job.
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If I was the human resource manager, I will accept the applicationfrom Debra Fines for several reasons.
回覆刪除這邊是不是要改成
If I were the human resource manager, I would accept the applicationfrom Debra Fines for several reasons.
I will accept the applicationfrom後面忘記空一格了
Debra has mare education 應該是要打more吧
Debra has gone to three universityies 大學的y忘記去掉了!
If I was the human resource manager
回覆刪除是假設所以was要改成were喔
applicationfrom...
有這個字嗎(汗
mare我查到了"義大利文"的"海"...
呃...所以他是...什麼字?
其他的沒有錯了吧
上述已備
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1.If I was the human resource manager, I will accept the applicationfrom Debra Fines for several reasons.
回覆刪除→If I were the human resource manager, I would accept the applicationfrom Debra Fines for several reasons.
2.First, Debra has mare education than Lynn.
→First, Debra has more education than Lynn.
3.She has had worked as a consultant and author...
→She has worked as a consultant and author...
(以上，淺見…)
If I "was" the human resource manager,
回覆刪除是were
First, Debra has "mare" education
是要寫more嗎
Debra has gone to three universityies while Lynn has gone to one.
我覺得這裡要用has been to
＂applicationfrom ＂、
回覆刪除＂mare＂、＂universityies＂錯字群。
＂If I was ..., I will accept ...＂
－－動詞改改ˇ
品婷這篇好像寫得比較匆忙呢。
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如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
上面都講光光哩@@
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