2011年5月18日 星期三

Comparing-3--Two teachers I have had

  I have had two teachers, Ms.Lin and Ms.Wu,  when I was an elementary school student.  These two teachers were similar in several ways.  For one thing,  they were both female and single, and in addtion, they were both kind.  Ms. wu was patient and careful, and so was Ms. Lin.  Moreover, Ms.Lin as well as Ms. Wu was an English teacher.  Besides, Ms. Wu worked hard.  Likewise, Ms. Lin worked hard, too.  They not only taught us contents in the textbook but also exposed us to some useful knowledge.  Last, it was fun to attend these two teachers' classes because both of them let students learn English by playing some games.
  I think Ms. Wu as well as Ms. Lin was really great teacher and that they influenced me so much.

7 則留言:

  1. Ms. "w"u was patient
    大寫

    Likewise, Ms. Lin worked hard, too.
    我覺得後面的too可以不用

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  2. Moreover, Ms.Lin as well as Ms. Wu was an English teacher.
    上面那句有加冠詞下面那句沒有
    I think Ms. Wu as well as Ms. Lin was really great teacher
    其他應該沒什麼問題吧 ^^

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  3. Ms. wu
    大寫喔

    Likewise, Ms. Lin worked hard, too
    不知道有likewise還需不需要too(思

    然後就沒了吧

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  4. Likewise, Ms. Lin worked hard, too
    too刪掉

    就醬

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  5. For one thing..., and in addtion, ...
    是"addition"才對。

    乾乾淨淨的文章。

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  6. 都被講光了= =...

    還是喜歡看品婷的文章@Q@!
    很清楚XD

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  7. Ms. wu was patient and careful, and so was Ms. Lin.
    錯字Wu哦~~

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