2011年4月20日 星期三

My Favorite Holiday

There are many holidays in a year, among which I like Chinese New Year most.  For one thing, I can have several days off.  Since I don't have to go to school, I need not worry about my assignments.  For another thing, I can receive red envelopes.  I always make good use of the money I receive.  I save half of it and use the rest to buy what I need.  In addition, I can have a reunion with my family and relatives.  We can have a big dinner and play games together.  Besides, I can have a good time with the cousins who I can meet very often.  From what I have said above, I think Chinese New Year is a pleasant holiday and I really like it very much.
張貼者： 於

9 則留言:

  1. 妤如2011年4月24日 凌晨3:41

    Besides, I can have ...the cousins who I can meet very often.
    ＂who＂在下覺得要用＂whom＂。


    欣賞清爽的文章。

    如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。

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  2. 芳珠2011年4月27日 晚上11:43

    I can have a good time with the cousins who I can meet very often.
    是不是怪怪的阿?
    應該是不常見的親戚吧 不然應該能常常有美好的時光~~

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  3. 亭安2011年5月4日 晚上10:57

    I can have a good time with the cousins "who" I can meet very often
    應該是whom

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  4. 姜姜(21)2011年5月4日 晚上11:10

    Besides, I can...with the cousins who I can meet very often.這邊我覺得語意怪怪的。
    然後品婷文章開頭都是I ^_^
    可以換換其他句型。

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  5. 孟萱2011年5月4日 晚上11:15

    Besides, I can have a good time with the cousins who I can meet very often.
    這裡的who要改成whom哦~~~

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  6. 姚薇...愛慘珉玗了!!!2011年5月4日 晚上11:27

    I can have a good time with the cousins who I can meet very often.
    裡的who 是whom

    以上~
    辛苦了

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  7. 篔簹2011年5月4日 晚上11:34

    can have a good time with the cousins who I can meet very often.
    裡的who 是whom

    然後就沒有錯了

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  8. 冠伶2011年5月5日 上午9:18

    We can have a big dinner and play games together.
    →big dinner我會想換成feast或nosh-up…
    (以上，淺見…)

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  9. 宜珍2011年5月6日 清晨7:32

    the cousins who I can meet very often
    who應該用whom

    沒了......吧!!!

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