My sister got lost, so I'm looking for her. She is a teenaged girl, who is tall and slim. She is about 165 centimeters and 40 kilograms. In addition, she has long black curly hair and big eyes. She has three moles on her face and she wears glasses. Besides, she's dressed in a white pants and a black coat. She also wears a black hat and holds a big bag. She speaks very loudly and uses gestures when talking. If anyone sees her, please call me.
My sister got lost, so I'm looking for her.
回覆刪除時態要一致。
Besides, she's dressed in a white pants...
"a"應該要去掉。
感覺蠻精簡的。
如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。
she's dressed in a white pants a應該要去掉吧
回覆刪除還有你妹也太瘦了吧!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a white pants 這邊應該要去掉a
回覆刪除然後你沒有留下電話號碼...
找到你姐姐要怎麼聯絡呢XD
你們家的人都好瘦噢.....
回覆刪除白色的酷子好酷!
she's dressed in a white pants
回覆刪除a要拿掉
My sister got lost, so I'm looking for her
回覆刪除的I'm 改成 I was比較好吧
是說沒有電話應該會找不到人喔(汗
1.My sister got lost, so I'm looking for her.
回覆刪除→My sister got lost, so I'm looking for her now.
2.Besides, she's dressed in a white pants and a black coat.
→Besides, she's dressed in a pair of white pants and a black coat.
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a white pants
回覆刪除這個.....不用說你應該懂
就醬...